SmokeAvery's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[AIM - Battle Damaged Gojira (REJECTED!!)]

Just resubmit and edit the intro to be shorter

CIEIRMusic responds:

No. I am protesting this to the bitter end. It's not about the prize it's about principle.

And for your information, this is one of my best works. I cannot edit it without ruining it and I will not sell out my artistic freedom and expression, just to please a bunch of pompus judges who claim to relate to artists but are indeed sell outs themselves looking for people to exploit.

[Meteor "Epic Final"]

This is good, this can be even better with some good mic positions. Are you using the composer cloud?

RemiAgullo responds:

Hello Smoke! Thanks for your comment! Yes I am using the composer cloud and mainly Hollywood instruments, the Gold one, so I don't have the option of different mic positions. This is my first composition using a full Orchestra, Epic style so I believe I can improve a lot in mixing before to invest in the Platinum. I have never used the Platinum version so I don't know how much difference it makes. Do you?

[Planet D]

Why not? You'll only learn more

N77 responds:

True... :D

[AIM - The Final Fight]

You should go ahead and take your time and finish it, id like to hear this again when you fix it.

CloakedSoup responds:

Thanks for the review! Im pretty new to Production (I usually only ever had to worry about composition/notation), so I'm still learning every day. That being said, I know there are several things I could improve if I spent some time with this.

[Newgrounds WIP #2]

Let me know when it's done, so I can compare.

NevoMusic responds:

Alright, thanks for the comment. I'll certainly send you a message when it's completed! :)

[Midnight Paradise]

Sup buddy T-reb is right about the intro. Instead cutting it though just try to have a more interesting first 15 seconds

Jakki responds:

i might as well do that, thanks!

[Deaf Tones]

Im giving 5 because I haven't listened to this genre your attempting yet, and I didn't wanna rate cause I don't understand... But I like the unique you bring. I guess I can say, when you do your breaks within the song have like a more impact to the drop when your bring it back, you know adding some more unique flavor to the tune. I guess try and experiment by adding some different instruments. Like you know change the lead sound real quick for a few bars and have a break then drop it back with the original lead. I guess to keep the ears interested to hear what else your gonna do.

bdog705 responds:

thanks for the review man, pretty helpful
it was kinda tough to make the right things that it, different notes and pitches and such were kinda limited with the song as it wouldn't have fit very well in certain areas
as for drops i don't know how to do any of that, i hate drops i prefer just big transitions, ill save drops for crappy dubstep and hardstep lol

[Sky Diving]

I like the melody you have in there.

Felocai responds:

I'm glad you like it :3